Dave Alan Walker

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Fountain Of Youth - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In the midst
of an everlasting journey
with no arrival in sight
a fountain of youth
is draining away

Don't waste your life
don't throw it all away
live it to the full
but with a future in your mind


Comments about Fountain Of Youth by Dave Alan Walker

  • Smoky Hoss (9/13/2013 9:02:00 PM)

    Bright and enduring words of hope, it's what we all need. Thanks Dave, good one! (Report) Reply

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  • Alla Simone (8/31/2013 8:27:00 PM)

    Captivating language with a prosaic flow. An excellent picture is painted in the first stanza, then expounded upon and made meaningful in the second stanza. It's actually pretty amazing what you've accomplished with so few words! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran Vipins Puthooran (8/27/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    Youth is blossom until autumn comes/ really a good poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Nicanor P. Tiosen (8/25/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    A very timely message to the youth, and to everybody. (Report) Reply

  • Dennis Field Dennis Field (8/24/2013 9:21:00 AM)

    nice poem,
    great thoughts for your life (Report) Reply

  • Richard York (8/22/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    Good one. Like it. I like your work. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/21/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    Live life to the full. Use it well. Beautiful message through nicely crafted lines. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (8/21/2013 6:34:00 AM)

    Very well said, Fountain of youth is draining away...thoughtful poem especially for youngsters..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • David Wood David Wood (8/21/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    A good messagte Dave, have you read my sonnet 82 on youth? ? (Report) Reply

  • Pere Risteski Pere Risteski (8/20/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    Thats it. Shortly, but very strong.
    ...a fountain of youth
    is draining away... (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (8/19/2013 3:21:00 PM)

    a good message in this poem. nicely written (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 19, 2013


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