Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,127 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Fountain Of Youth - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In the midst
of an everlasting journey
with no arrival in sight
a fountain of youth
is draining away

Don't waste your life
don't throw it all away
live it to the full
but with a future in your mind

Comments about Fountain Of Youth by Dave Alan Walker

  • Silver Star - 4,414 Points Smoky Hoss (9/13/2013 9:02:00 PM)

    Bright and enduring words of hope, it's what we all need. Thanks Dave, good one! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Alla Simone (8/31/2013 8:27:00 PM)

    Captivating language with a prosaic flow. An excellent picture is painted in the first stanza, then expounded upon and made meaningful in the second stanza. It's actually pretty amazing what you've accomplished with so few words! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (8/27/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    Youth is blossom until autumn comes/ really a good poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nicanor P. Tiosen (8/25/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    A very timely message to the youth, and to everybody. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Dennis Field (8/24/2013 9:21:00 AM)

    nice poem,
    great thoughts for your life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Richard York (8/22/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    Good one. Like it. I like your work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,588 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/21/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    Live life to the full. Use it well. Beautiful message through nicely crafted lines. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/21/2013 6:34:00 AM)

    Very well said, Fountain of youth is draining away...thoughtful poem especially for youngsters..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,717 Points David Wood (8/21/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    A good messagte Dave, have you read my sonnet 82 on youth? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pere Risteski (8/20/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    Thats it. Shortly, but very strong.
    ...a fountain of youth
    is draining away... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (8/19/2013 3:21:00 PM)

    a good message in this poem. nicely written (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 19, 2013

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