Flippers & Mask...[ Inspired By Lora Colon's Great Poem: " The Pain Is There "; Short; Loneliness; Succor ]

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Alas, poor Lora, alone in bed at night,
feeling the PAIN, albeit out of sight.
If I could concoct 4 U a magic potion...
to ease pain, I'd swim the biggest ocean.

But first I'd don my flippers and my mask.
A smile in return is all, from you, I'd ask.

(February....24...2020)

Bri Edwards

Sunday, February 23, 2020

Topic(s) of this poem: nightfall,loneliness

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Supper soon!I'd better get movin'! ! !

Lora's got scads of 'lonely', 'lost love', and 'love never found' poems, often written to perfection.

bri

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Mj Lemon 03 March 2020

Aaahhhhh...I sense the Bard. He did observe- -" Now get you to my lady’s chamber and tell her, let her paint an inch thick, to this favor she must come. Make her laugh at that." Oooohhh what a night!

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