Faddish Harvest Of Fall Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Faddish Harvest Of Fall

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when the season ~ fall comes ~
feel many hands over me
white hands
all kinds of fingers
searching for What?
has nothing more there

But,
there, they are

I can stand up myself
and starry is my vision
i forgot the rusted chains

i see the dark hands
through of

white fluffy blossoms
reaping what they sowed

all that gray
troubled with that blue
dissolve itself in tears
Like the wane moon

then,
as is above
is not as is below?

I feel many hands over me

faddish harvest of Fall

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
fall, harvest, faddish, hands, human, above and below....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 12 May 2013

Dear Shahzia, has something divine and human like you said. We are the both. And You are right at the end we all reap what we sow. The law of return. Thank you for your kind words.

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Shahzia Batool 11 May 2013

In poetry the imagery of agriculture and harvest straightly touch human life, the rise and fall the ups and downs, the fair seed time, sowing, reaping, garnering, winnowing, cutting....it's all so natural so human...even the Divine voice speaks in terms of harvesting it says we'll reap the reward inthe Day of judgement of what we have been sowing in the field of this world...this is your soul-searching in your own way...! ! ! beautiful work! ! ! if i am a lil right in my humble opinion! ! !

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Poetheart Morgan 10 May 2013

Dear Poet Ace of Black Heart, It's my own harvest! Thanks so much for your feedback, always a pleasure to read.

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Poetheart Morgan 10 May 2013

Dear Poet Altair, Thanks i loved your interpretation of my poem! ! ! Yes, is a little sad but spiced whit sweetness. And is about the age too, you always has something good to add. Really a poet soul. And i am very grateful for the fruit of fall season, makes me smile a lot.

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Ace Of Black Hearts 09 May 2013

With each ounce of grain, the farmer smiles. Running his old fashioned tractor for miles. Fields mechanically plucked, with all the love. It is almost sad to see, but it as it is this the time of the year. What a wonderful poem, and you have interesting way of seeing a fall harvest.

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