Avinash Nair

Rookie - 500 Points (19/10/1988)

Existence - Poem by Avinash Nair

When time passes as time does,
Without you noticing it passing by,
A helpless senselessness creeps in you
That becomes impossible to hide.
You act and you react
But tis all in vain,
You cannot hide the fact
The constant pain,
Of life and living
Of strife and surviving.
You smile without any happiness,
You cry but there is no sadness,
Tis all a numbness,
A coldness
Of mere existence.

Comments about Existence by Avinash Nair

  • Rookie - 500 Points Avinash Nair (1/8/2014 10:51:00 PM)

    @All thank you for your valued comments (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,930 Points Rajesh Thankappan (1/8/2014 10:32:00 AM)

    Yes, sometimes life benumbs us yet we have to look for a silver lining. A good write. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,494 Points Unwritten Soul (10/23/2013 7:33:00 AM)

    When we talk about truth, pain and fears can be there because it true..as time walks it does tell what you tell here...an existence of reality_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,266 Points Vishal Sharma (6/9/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    it reminded me a poem by shakespeare indeed a great ant natural write
    and sparking effect the poem has produced
    keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 31, 2013

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