Liliana EL.

Ever? - Poem by Liliana EL.

Another day
I may hug him
I may smile and say hi
I may love him
Perhaps we'll go out
for a walk in the park
by the pond under the light
The scarlet ibis' will fly out
The grand lotus petals will gleam

By sunset we'd have smiled many times
and given some good laughs too
The night will be perfect as we stare into each others eyes
Enjoying the intensity of our rush
of emotion

Another day.

Today is not that day.

Comments about Ever? by Liliana EL.

  • Rookie - 335 Points Vlad Mutuleanu (10/20/2013 2:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, there are days when I feel exactly the same. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 335 Points Vlad Mutuleanu (10/20/2013 2:20:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, there are days when I feel the exact same way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 335 Points Vlad Mutuleanu (10/20/2013 2:15:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, fits me so much right now! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 657 Points Lawerence Mize (9/28/2013 3:47:00 PM)

    But tomorrow may be. Great poem. Enjoyed it a lot. And yes, I write from experience. Thank you for the nice comments. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,174 Points Tiku . (9/27/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    very nice.have a nice day.simple and beautiful. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013

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