Eternal Father! ! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Eternal Father! !

Rating: 5.0


From this bank of misery I may depart,
To a wide sky soon with my lonely heart
The time has come to hear the sound of bugle
Then I'll strengthen my wings like an eagle
And soar high from this land of beast
To my Eternal Father's home for the feast

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'Tis my belief that I will be going soon from here leaving this sinful body here into the hands of this beasts! ! ! ! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 23 July 2012

Kerala is the heavenly land of God of Nature. But you are scared by human beasts and is raring to rise to Elysium for tasting the feast. Well done VPN. Rhythm flows like the rills on the slopes of hills. Rated *****

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Unwritten Soul 23 July 2012

Lovely write....you rest from writing for so long, but once you come back you bring the shine again..loved it_Unwritten Soul

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Claudia Krizay 26 July 2012

excellent poem! I love it!

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2012

Good poem-God bless.

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The Reader 29 August 2012

I strongly agree with unwritten soul....it's a qualitative work...

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 02 August 2012

I really look for poems with a spiritual aroma.....coz that sounds me how a poet takes himself and his life......to learn from such worlds......... brilliant job!

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Neela Nath Das 28 July 2012

Oh, Vipins, so rhythmic write.I know this is your temporary feeling which made you write this poem with pessimistic note. Marvelous.

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Valsa George 26 July 2012

Short and curt.... but what fantastic beat! !

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