Ecstacy Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Ecstacy

Rating: 4.9


I adore her lustrous eyes
Those saphire eyes,
Where I see the surge of seas:
The surge of love in bluish colour,
That wake my frozen heart's fervour.
I always stand at the brine
Of her heart where love is devine;
Where its vibrant waves are chaste
To churn my passionate heart in haste.
I often sail through the streams
Of our shoreless dreams
To see the glow in her astral eyes,
That bewitch my heart in ecstacy.

Saturday, October 29, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 30 October 2011

Bravo! I take my hat off for you, my friend! Beauty and talent clearly radiate through this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! R.D.V. from NYC....

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Vivek Haldar 30 October 2011

I am bewitched by this poem of yours....great piece of work...and the rhyming scheme is intact too...

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Patrick Villareal 30 October 2011

I really like this a lot because I too love this beautiful thing....some of my poems directly involve ecstasy people just got to figure out which ones, good write, very interesting

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Fae Sebastian 30 October 2011

very beautiful, emotional poem! awesome job.

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Cosmic Dreamer 30 October 2011

Beautiful poem, well written... Good work.

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Ivan Ramirez 09 May 2012

You pictured everything so perfectly, beautifully done Vipins.

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Virginia Pecho Gely 28 December 2011

My heart vibrated upon reading this one. Your love desire has been fully pictured in this poem. She is a beauty and the words in this poem described the love in its splendor...No painting can capture love as you did Vipins. Congrats and continue to move us, to breathe with us and to make us dream with you...Virginia

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Kiran Sam 08 November 2011

Nice imagery my friend, well written. Keep it coming..

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Sajna Kailas 05 November 2011

wow! ! ! ! ! ! what an ecstacy now i forgot my agony! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Sajna Kailas 05 November 2011

wow! ! ! ! ! ! what an ecstacy now i forgot my agony! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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