Kevin Fisher

Rookie (8/28/90 / Canton, Ohio)

Enter My Abyss - Poem by Kevin Fisher

So much screaming and never ending blood
Sitting and watching as the line for the torture
Its finally your turn and they string you up onto a barbed wire fence with wire around my ankles, wrists, and throat
They stick giant spikes through your stomach and into your spine
The pain
The agony
The pleasure
Your blood turns to acid and it burns you inside and out
Your eyes and skin are melting
Your screams echo the abyss
These screams are your warning
Stay out of my bloody abyss
Or suffer there fate
Now come enter my abyss
I dare you

Comments about Enter My Abyss by Kevin Fisher

  • Silver Star - 3,111 Points Bernard Snyder (9/28/2015 9:35:00 PM)

    Great poem. It does sounds like scenes from a movie! Congrats! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 533 Points Declan White (9/28/2015 8:59:00 PM)

    I'm just glad that the letters 'by' are in the last word of the title! That's a relief. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 258 Points Oluwatomisin Eshton (9/28/2015 1:34:00 AM)

    just words and it was like something out of an horror movie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Darkness J (9/18/2009 5:57:00 PM)

    Great poem and great vocabulary and I just felt the strenght of 'I dare you' :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Private Girl (4/15/2009 12:15:00 PM)

    i like this, Your awesome :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Breeanna Mcelmurry (3/21/2009 10:56:00 PM)

    every nice work: 0. keep it up kk (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amber Kangas (3/20/2009 9:41:00 AM)

    well written it makes you feel as if you are really there and it reminds me of the way i feel alot of the time (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pandora Chaos (3/12/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    i love this poem, great images come to mind as u read this poem. awsome, my kind of poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 11, 2009

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