In my life course
I had failed to enforce
Any sort of
Gravitational force
In the darkest night
A white horse
A light source
Saved me
Divorce
(2008/6/30)
This light source a new course to follow, no remorse from divorce - tomorrow! *10*! ! Great read! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
I like the tension created between the 'heavy' first stanza + first line of the second one and 'light' hope finally found out in the last three lines. It describes very well the tearing between a dark necessary situation and the way hope driving to new expectations. An intense write. 10
The ability to dust yourself off and move on....the light (a spirit now free) ...excellently penned...with amazing emotion...strength. Thanks Persian, you never fail..in putting your message across my friend regards Jon
good luck with life. it can be hard at times but we know with patience rewards will also come.
a very good composition...selected words beautifully arrnged...congrats, amir...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nicely written piece, sometimes divorce is the only answer when marriages fail, sad but true,10 Lynda xx