Distance Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Distance

Rating: 5.0


The outcome of distance
Moments so awkward

Common sense, not common
Wisdom, very wayward

Lovers of the past
Looking fondly backward

When sky seems to flame
Remember me afterward

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 31 August 2009

Such a lovely write, Amir.. I love most these lines of yours below When sky seems to flame Remember me afterward Take care, Meggie

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Saadat Tahir 29 September 2009

ATONCE BEAUTIFUL AND PAINFUL...TH INEVITABLE PARTING LOVED IT CHEERS sorry fr the caps...

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Emma Adamyan 21 September 2009

u let everyone feel that sadness of an unwanted distance. gorgeous piece

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Rup Pokharel 10 September 2009

I found no words to praise you Nightingale. Word Distance itself weighs your gravity. Nice piece of art of yours. Give more.10+++++

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Tsira Goge 06 September 2009

Hello, Beautiful poem, nightingale, you do not see back rose? 10x10.. Tsira

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Distance can create awkward moments and affect wisdom. I agree with Meggie and I think the last two lines are stunning. Great poem. 10 love Karin

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