I warm your heart
I'm the bird in your hand
I make your laughter
I eliminate your band
I'm the dust on your shoes
I'm always near
don't give up darling
Sunflower, my dear
(2008/6/12)
I gave my 10. The last lines are nostalgic. A film named Sunflower of Sophia Loren came to my mind. Great job done.
This is a beautifull felt-hearted poem by a warm heart. Such words for sure help not to give up! Thanks
song of the sunny bird to his sunflower sweet...well done, shiraz! 10
It is very gentle and warm poems the Nightingale, somebody will not dare on your poetic footpath to throw sunflower, especially, they harmfully for a throat of nightingale... Best wishes, Tsira
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
dust on your shoes, nice touch..