Deluge Poem by Mubeen Sadhika
Deluge
Pouroararencumberigouroughardust...
rivetirefflorescemiterriblexcessourust...
crucifyackicknocknotugrabearobust...
thrustrustricknowindawnedrasticrust...
...................................broken completely(the point at which)
...................................collapsed absolutely(could be a bend)
...................................crippled entirely(not to be linear)
...................................crushed totally(nothing flexible)
...................................shattered brutally(no way to see)
Ensemblelementanamountangier...
driftricklelevateruptensendanger...
streameagrerstwhilearnestrigger...
tandemeandereapiponderipper...
...................................Jammed hardly(put into pieces)
...................................thrashed fatally(get away with)
...................................crumbled unnoticeably(stuck in place)
...................................destroyed lethally(let go out)
...................................ruined utterly(take no chance)
presumenrichaggardauntowear...
remarkillittleruditerrowhereager...
strokeasebbarrenaivelongateasier...
reverturnagutaskeenipeeranger...
It is a very original poem. The linking of words for connecting the ideas and the lines is wonderful.Thank you for sharing....10+++
Experimental, innovative but troublesome poem...Thank you Poet.
I'm inclined to agree with Anand here. Still, it's an interesting experiment. Your words seem to capture a sense of being overwhelmed.
Sorry, but I felt that the style has taken precedence over the poem here.
yeah, I was troubled reading it first but I've read it. Good!
A well articulated style of poem writing.Do read my 20th Century Fox...10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/8/2024 3:39:54 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I find this something like a puzzle in the poetry format. A good attempt.