Eagle's Sky Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Eagle's Sky

Rating: 5.0


A vast limitless
unending horizon
always convexed on
vulnerable chicks
tenaciously surveilling
to peck the pick
alive or dead with
regardless variance
Argus eyed sucking
by vision noosed
around the afflicted
in fine feather
astute authority
appalling legend
the characteristic
sacred wings spread
across the whole
sphere filled with
humming whirr.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 26 July 2009

Interesting vision from the sky.

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 26 July 2009

Well poetic expression..........

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Surya . 28 July 2009

beautiful and ampt description. nice wordings 'by vision noosed around the afflicted in fine feather astute authority appalling legend the characteristic sacred wings spread across the whole sphere filled with humming whirr. ' voted 10 surya

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 July 2009

hey! you are a powerful wordsmith! ! 10+

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Zeinab Sherif 02 August 2009

i loved it because it is having a great idea & it makes me think & conclude many things really, thanks.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 September 2020

A poet like you Mubeen, Should fly like an eagle, With watchful eyes of poetry

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Cecilia Real 19 October 2009

Good poem. It aptly describes The Eagle - authority figure and sacred symbolism of freedom; awesome, feared, yet perfectly beautiful in its limitless space. I love the poem.

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Rahul Sharma 27 September 2009

GOOD POEM.......................... KEEP IT UP...................

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 September 2009

you bring it in motion...sound and sight...yes as naseer says the sound of wings could be heard as it iss survieling...to pick...your style...diction exploits this subject

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Vijay Gupta 17 September 2009

nice poem................

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