Intuition at its peak
the vibe connected to
the other end's rage
the aura radiated
to hook-up the jag
the senses multiplied
insight became visual
full of clairvoyance
paranormal living
transcendental communique'
platonic perception
hanging in vacuum
vision submerged
in the third element.
superb wordings...very precise n nice picturisation.. must b given 10.. only one thing i cant relate.its like a paranormal..i think yes..but cant get the relation between the title and poem.. will u plz tell me
very perfect work & unique i liked the way it is written. keep on writing.
Hi-tech communication! Feels like the T.V. series Dark Angel (Jessica Alba) . An unique idea..........
Simply beautiful, you are a talented poet. I have read several of your poems.
sixth sense...my favorite......10/10 read m&m's and isi(intersubjective intercourse.)
Verse full of experience and the series is expressed philosophically and enchantingly.
You know when I read this i feel like such an average poet.10
enjoyed very much...........nice thought! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! \i gave u ten! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
platonic perception hanging in vacuum vision submerged in the third element. Oh ammmmmazing pictographs! my memory flooded in your wording! flying into inner to inner powerful sight bold and beautiful! 10++++