Chocolates Chocolates Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Chocolates Chocolates

Rating: 4.7


I am 20
I am eating
chocolates
ice-creams
pastries
My lips have
sweet honey.

I am 20
I am fond of
pets
stray dogs
butterflies
distressed
animals
My heart has
full of passion.

I am 20
I have
twinkling eyes
turned up nose
smooth skin
sparkling teeth
I am the
emblem of beauty.

I am 20
I am drawing
attention of
boys
men
old men
dejected men
I am the
myth of love.

I am 20
I found my
perfect mate
I am caring
sharing
completing
the bliss of life.

I am
no more
adored
loved
I am
turning 40.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 22 August 2009

beautiful write..worth a smile I love this..nice style..unique thoughts At 40, I guess you are still lovely and being adored....smile 10++ thanks a lot... Lovelots, Maia

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Nikunj Sharma 08 September 2009

You traverse a good part of life in this one....20 to 40...wow is the word...read my poem called I AM.... U may like it

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Angel's lyre 12 September 2009

it was nice to read your poem, the end was surprising and unexpected :) be blessed

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Anju Addanki 17 September 2009

hi i loved this poem and the end is very very true and nice ending.

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Siddartha Montik 24 November 2016

beautiful depiction of a young girl who turned in to twrnteens...wonderful to read...pretty work, love this poem! 10+++

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It was said well about the attitude in the age of 20 and 40, Well designed to read, nice.thank you

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 October 2016

Thank you so much Sir for reading my poems. Your comments are valuable for me.

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Patrick A. Martin 09 October 2009

Mubeen I agree with Joyce. Next time you are eating chocolates close your eyes and dream you are the most beautiful flower in the garden of life. I hope your dream comes true.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 September 2009

better to be loved than adored is'nt it...a very sweet poem...enjoyed every bit of it...taking it into my favs

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Sherri Coulter 24 September 2009

I like joyce's outlook- should everyone only see it this way..10+

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