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Tiny Rhyme

Fish oh! fish
swish a miss
wish on hiss
shush to hush

Push push
oh! fish
flush a blush
fresh 'n' mush

Fish oh! fish
slush the gush
slash in gash
splash the plush

Fish oh! fish
pose to posh
rush a mash
fish oh! gosh!

Submitted: Saturday, August 29, 2009
Edited: Friday, June 10, 2011

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  • Robin D'Souza (4/8/2011 4:18:00 PM)

    I love it! It's so nonsensical...kind of like Dr. Seuss. I love Dr. Seuss.: D

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  • Yaseen Anwer (12/7/2010 4:09:00 AM)

    Excellently penned. Good Luck ahead!

    Cheers!
    Yaseen Anwer

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/28/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    Excellent rhymes. You’ve done it.
    Rhymes are scaring please write more and more.
    Ten+++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Lingerie-IG*
    Enigmatic Navel or other poems

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  • Eyan Desir (10/19/2009 4:01:00 PM)

    this poem was a little funny
    good write

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  • Brittany Rivera (10/10/2009 11:49:00 AM)

    I like that poem.Nice words, And, Good ryhme.

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  • Munia Khan (10/9/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    Very impressive tiny lil work...I really enjoyed it a lot.10 is for sure from me......

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  • Anthony Edmond John (10/2/2009 7:00:00 AM)

    Nice and illustrative Rhymes.. Nice work man.

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  • Opeyemi Borisade (9/29/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    Mubeen,
    I read with my mind & it's now really twisted. Graet rhyming...good work! Cheers

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  • Villager Gulabo (9/29/2009 3:15:00 AM)

    a real gud poem....specially the rhyme wala part....

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  • Noel Horlanda (9/29/2009 12:48:00 AM)

    This piece contains strong rhymes, nice to read especially to kids. Besides the lines are melodious, there are simple musical notes in it. Well done...cheers 10+

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