Treasure Island

Mubeen Sadhika


Tiny Rhyme


Fish oh! fish
swish a miss
wish on hiss
shush to hush

Push push
oh! fish
flush a blush
fresh 'n' mush

Fish oh! fish
slush the gush
slash in gash
splash the plush

Fish oh! fish
pose to posh
rush a mash
fish oh! gosh!

Submitted: Saturday, August 29, 2009
Edited: Friday, June 10, 2011

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/28/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    Excellent rhymes. You’ve done it.
    Rhymes are scaring please write more and more.
    Ten+++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Lingerie-IG*
    Enigmatic Navel or other poems (Report) Reply

  • Munia Khan (10/9/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    Very impressive tiny lil work...I really enjoyed it a lot.10 is for sure from me...... (Report) Reply

  • Noel Horlanda (9/29/2009 12:48:00 AM)

    This piece contains strong rhymes, nice to read especially to kids. Besides the lines are melodious, there are simple musical notes in it. Well done...cheers 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (9/28/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    Hey nice rhyme! ! ! ! ! ! This is fun to read..
    I guess you had great fun writing this poem too.. entertaining
    10++

    cheers
    Shan (Report) Reply

  • Shreya Chatterjee (9/28/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    dear,
    this was real cute...it reminded me of my childhood game of rhyming words and keep talking to myself in the process while I played alone with my toys...
    a trick to occupy myself
    a useful trick taught by my late grandfather
    a person who encouraged my to keep writing my mind out
    a person who indeed valued my funny thoughts
    and kept telling others, I was capable to doing good...
    with regards
    shreya...
    keep up he good work dear.. (Report) Reply

  • Latasha Hall (9/28/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    I like this one.............
    Very well written.
    This tied my tongue in 20 million knots.
    =D

    10+ (Report) Reply

  • bobby k (9/28/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    i'd wish to kissh that swishy fish,
    but fear that if i did,
    that i would get just slime 'n smelly
    on my cold wet lipsh!

    sooo cute and very Suessian! ! just wonderful for a childrens poetry book! (Report) Reply

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