.....In The Middle.... Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

.....In The Middle....

Rating: 4.2


.....to be at the center...
.....not to begin from....
.....no end till...............
.....to hang on..............
.....to dwell in the core...
.....have to balance........
.....could be halfway.....
.....going in the midst...
.....to keep equidistant...
.....neither pro nor for...
.....never to be partial....
.....always in equilibrium...
.....trying to be steady........
.....symmetrically equal.....
.....aptly unbiased................
.....rightful indifference.....
.....median of the path......
.....mean of the sum.........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 29 August 2009

A well constructed poem. To be in the core, have a equilibrium; interesting words and an interesting way of writing......thank you...........10+++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 August 2009

The middle path is always good, as you say.

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Zeinab Sherif 29 August 2009

fantastic i liked it so so much

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Vaibhav Pandey 29 August 2009

very interesting construction...loved the idea...10

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 30 August 2009

you love technical stuff? already there was one purely technical poem, now mathematical poem, its like opening my engineering maths book... nice try, lovely construction, well coined into a poem

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Asma Khan 08 October 2009

A new dimensional poem. Always in equilibfrium trying to be steady symmetrically equal superb I liked it.

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Gerda Vita 20 September 2009

Maybe dots help you to be in balance... maybe it helps you to put your rich world in words...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 September 2009

a very interesting poem...you take us to the middle with good balance...lovely

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Shekhar Joshi 15 September 2009

Well i hate Maths and therefore geometry......but i liked the way u wrote your poem......nicely done.......

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Rafique Farooqi 10 September 2009

We can see our loves geometrically and place our prospects in directions, to sum up our losses and gains, ..... your writting style attracted me.....wonderful write

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