The apex of that tomb
has a very big opening
thousands can descend
within seconds to that
valley of buried dreams.
The fatal gift of life
thrown to totter of grave
brooding obscure enigma
the large void succumbs
innumerable phantasms.
The marvel of being
fantasizing the thirst
to separate the vivacious
pulsing of the beat and
the dumb to slid.
A very striking description of the thought of suicide. Why is this thought so tempting? Maybe we have to draw out the possibilities of life to its limits, before we can really live? Unfortunately far too many grasp this thought as a solution...
very moving...i am not very religious but i still believe that this earth and the whole humanity is not for us to destroy and that includes our own very life no matter how difficult it is.
Mubeen in this year alone I knoe four teenages from the one school who choose to use this window you describe so powerfully here.
thousands can descend within seconds to that valley of buried dreams. the large void succumbs innumerable phantasms. you write very fine english, very polished...... and fine thoughts clearly expressed. thank you dea r poetess. tony
An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in heightened poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Mubeen.
Your words really touched me.. May i have any other way to reach you and say a big thank you for such a masterpiece.
Abstract yet this imagery is touching …’ The fatal gift of life/thrown to totter of grave’ ~ indeed ultimate eventuality… thanks Sir for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
A beautiful and insightful peek into a dark and difficult subject. The mind is a very strange thing that it can convince us that suicide is romantic, (as in Romeo and Juliet) or is an escape is fasinating when you consider that we are accepting escape to the unknown over a fear of the known, --10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Chasing the carrot, till one breaks through the glass, into the fall of reality.