Delicate Demolition Poem by Smoky Hoss

Delicate Demolition

Rating: 5.0


Old men sit in old bars
drinking old drinks, smoking old cigars;
Writers go crazy sitting and staring at empty pages,
both burn away their youth, on and on through the ages-

I once tried to write about life.
For a decade, or three.
A thousand pages, maybe more,
when I realized I'd been writing
with invisible ink.
So, I gave it all up,
understanding there will always be
so much more
that I can never know, or see.
More than I can ever imagine knowing or seeing.
Therefore, I have taken up dreaming:
late in the depths of night's dark
I wander through the universe,
gathering dusty-diamonds, glittering
across the galaxies;
I hold the sensual-stars
in the palm of my hand,
drink from the beautiful-bosom
of the Milky Way,
roll and frolic in the weightless wonder
of lunar-love...
and then around sunrise
the quirky cosmos rebuke me back,
back to my world, where I awaken,
returning to my lost and wordless pages-

These are the delicate demolitions of living,
destroying dreams and
slowly tearing each man apart,
until he is completely gone;
even his words burnt away,
ashes upon the wind,
scattered unto the ends of the earth,
for better or for worse-

At night silent-stars look down,
smile, and twinkle
upon the old men, with their
aging dreams,
who sit there rolling their old poems up
into cigars,
and smoke them heartily.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 19 May 2013

Powerful stuff Smoky. Life is a dream. To die is to awaken. We can't possibly know it all. To dream is so much better.

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Valerie Dohren 18 May 2013

I hope you don't roll up your poems and smoke them Smoky, otherwise we wouldn't get to read them! ! Superb write.

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Patti Masterman 15 May 2013

I love the smoking of the poem-cigars. Engaging lines all through. Time to turn on the fans now. ;)

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Cosmic Dreamer 15 May 2013

To get lost in the journey of a good poem is always a pleasure... I thoroughly enjoyed this journey...

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Connie Yost 11 May 2013

I love this! When I have a bright white paper in front of me and can't think how to start writing, I will get out my dictionary, start reading anywhere and always happen on a good word which is my inspiration then. As always, your poems are wonderful!

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