Smoky Hoss

Freshman - 1,635 Points (01 may 1962 / U.S.A.)

Onward


Don't we all wonder, remotely
- in ways we cannot even fully understand -
'What's this all about? '
Age has invaded our mind
and hearts.
Onward we march.
Life has invaded our spirits
and souls.
As onward we march.
The future flows right on past
behind us.
And yet onward we march.
Living is a passing glance
a long goodbye.
Onward we march.
Where we are bound
no eye has seen
no tongue can tell
no mind does fathom.
Still onward we march.
On the trail of time lost
we take the exit to eternity.
Ever onward we march.
Do we wonder
what a wonder it is
that we're marching into?
We should.
We shall.
We are.
Through it all, onward we march.
Onward...

Submitted: Wednesday, September 05, 2012
Edited: Friday, September 07, 2012

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,682 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/25/2015 10:07:00 PM)

    onward we march with hope,
    there is always surprise and flop,

    onward we march..Smoky Hoss...Thank you for sharing such a nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,222 Points Lyn Paul (1/25/2015 6:12:00 PM)

    Do we wonder
    What a wonder is....
    Just love the positive flow in your words. How we just have to take what is thrown at us and keep on marching.
    Thank You Smoky (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 473 Points Phyllis Strong (1/25/2015 3:34:00 PM)

    “Through it all, onward we march.
    Onward...”

    Great poem Smoky. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,953 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (1/25/2015 2:51:00 AM)

    Thought provoking poem. True, it is bit nebulous. Yet, let us march forward knowing that we all have a destiny at the end. Wonderful thinking. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,093 Points Valsa George (9/14/2012 8:38:00 AM)

    We march onwards, braving all obstacles on our way, never pausing and never looking back on the trail of time until we merge in eternity! ! Beautiful write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (9/12/2012 1:30:00 PM)

    That`s all we can do, march onward and hope.so well stated. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Constance K Yost (9/7/2012 4:05:00 AM)

    Marching onward and wondering why-but ours is not to reason why-excellent poem, it's one of those that
    start me thinking. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,376 Points Dave Walker (9/6/2012 5:12:00 PM)

    A fantastic poem, I think we all wonder at some point what it's all about. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,025 Points Valerie Dohren (9/6/2012 2:33:00 PM)

    None of us know where we are heading to, we can only speculate, Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 226 Points Joseph Anderson (9/6/2012 11:06:00 AM)

    I guess we should look for the one that reads-NO EXIT.A vivid, somewhat startling telling of
    our scramble through life's jungle-truthful to the end-a10 (Report) Reply

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