Deep Within You Dream Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Deep Within You Dream

Rating: 5.0


Deep within you dream;
and how you spent your days-
kept gone and others none to have.
With night you come and ride away.
Thus am common be and labors man,
and dreary all my hope is washed away.
Why is how you keep me deep inside,
that place that is no more-
and you within this dream I found.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 18 February 2010

that place that is no more- and you within this dream I found...very dreamy indeed like eyes in a picture you cannot stop looking at, well done thinking poem ++++=10 regards

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Patti Masterman 18 September 2009

Really like this poem; seems like pure iip all condensed; many poems into a single one..(smile)

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Brianna Cruz 21 August 2009

that poem really stuck to me. i dont noe why but it did. its very...sweet and its too incredible for words =)

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 August 2009

sweet, lovely and captivating.. romantic title... I love this... 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Inner Whispers 16 August 2009

hmn...dream within her dream, your dream is awakened from within...short verses, meaningfully weaven...Good morning! (here)

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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