Dandling Childhood Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Dandling Childhood

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Life runs with vision to fall down on Earth
Mother holds to dandle after the birth.
Lap to lap ladies transfer and give love,
Many wait to watch smile just like clove.

They feel happy but child cries at the rate,
Child too loves them all never does hate.
In each second he remembers his past,
God remains in his mind, idea does last.

While starts speaking many take out fun,
He hides, plays with sand, mother does run.
Behind him she searches her childhood days,
In half word speech mom, mom a child says.

Hearing call mother's heart fills in emotion,
She does pick up in to her lap with affection.
Washing mud and sand from body she says
Oh my child you see in East coming sun rays.

Child collects conch shell, leaf, flower sure,
Very much innocent child remains in pure.
Mother being first teacher teaches to sing,
God's song in chirping of child ever does ring.

In wonder creation childhood is just like bud
This blooms gradually with beauty soft nod.
Colour sprinkles the memory, mind to colour,
For short span it comes in life pours flavour.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To fall down on Earth life runs with vision. After birth mother holds to dandle the child. Ladies transfer the child from lap to lap and give their love. Just like clove many wait to watch smile of the child. All feel happy by doing so, but child cries at the rate. He too loves them all and never does hate. He remembers his past in each second. His idea does last and God remains in his mind. While he starts speaking many take fun of it. He hides and plays with sand. Mother runs behind him. While she runs behind child she searches for her childhood memory. At that time child says in his half word speech, "mom and mom." Hearing such a call her heart fills in emotion. With affection she picks up in to her lap. She washes mud and sand from his body and says, "Oh my child, in East coming sun rays you see. Surely child collects conch, shell, leaf and flower. Child is very much innocent and remains in pure state. Mother teaches to sing the child being first teacher. In chirping of child God's song ever rings. This creation is wonder and childhood is just like a bud. With beauty softness and gentle bowing it grows. Colour sprinkles the memory over time and mind. Mind sprinkles to colour. Childhood comes for short span of time in life. But it adds flavour in life. This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 10 August 2016

Smile just like clove! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 02 November 2014

Childhood is a very beautiful phase of life when the child receives a lot of love and care from others especially from its mother! But unfortunately it is a brief period....As the child grows up, he is thrown into a turbulant world! Enjoyed!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 02 November 2014

While reading i feel iam reading Sarojini Naidu the very Indian culture is seen.. lovely fantastic with beautiful lines and Geetha has nicely commented with the lines :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 November 2014

Beautiful poem on Dandling Childhood. Very true said, mother is the first teacher. Child take first step holding mother's hand. Fantastic lines adds beauty to the poem. In wonder creation childhood is just like bud This blooms gradually with beauty soft nod. Colour sprinkles the memory, mind to colour, For short span it comes in life pours flavour. Loved the way you presented it so beautifully. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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