Dance Of Water Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Dance Of Water

Rating: 4.9


Many of us have seen that water flows,
Beside stream and rivers new wind blows.
Pond sings song for lotus and dances more,
Waves thrash sands by near far within shore.

Fishes swim in lap of water with open wings,
Conchs dance with shell forming shiny rings.
Air comes on sea and absorbs water more,
Sun rays fall and water vapours lovely pore.

While seasons move it dances in a circle,
From up to down and down to up miracle.
Further dances inside Earth hiding in soil,
It spreads fragrance in vapour burning coil.

Water dances to bring Green Age on sand,
In sprinkled water again man washes hand.
Adoring the river in holy mind all wait wind,
Dark cloud comes in sky dances light of kind.

Inside hidden rocks and in a dried leaf's lap,
Water smiles with billion of hopes, does clap.
God has created Nature it is liquid diamond,
By grace of water plants grow to give almond.

Obeying the wonder law water dances ever,
To serve creatures in rain this forgets never.
Eternal songs of God water sings, dances beat,
Ocean comes to unite with father and to meet.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Water flows. Many of us have seen it. This is also felt that beside river and stream wind blows at the rate. Pond holds water within and waves dance calmly with lotus by singing song. Within shore by near far waves thrash sands. In lap of water with open wings fishes swim. Forming shiny rings around, conches and shell dance. Air comes on sea and absorbs more water. Water vapours the lovely pore while sun rays fall on it. It dances in a circle while seasons move. It becomes from up to down and from down to up and this is of course a miracle. Inside Earth water dances hiding in soil. In burning coil of vapour it spreads fragrance. To bring Green Age on sand water dances. Again man washes hand in sprinkled water. All wait wind by adoring river in holy mind. Dark cloud comes in sky and dances with light of kind. Water smiles with billions of hopes and claps inside hidden rocks and in lap of a dried leaf. God has created this Nature. Water is liquid diamond ornament of Nature mother. Only by grace of water plants grow as the need and gift us almond. Obeying the wonder law of universe, water dances more. In flow to serve creatures this never forgets. Eternal songs of God water sings and each beat dances. With such flow water comes towards ocean and ocean comes closer to unite with father and to meet. Thus water ever dances." This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alesia Leach 01 November 2014

Well penned and loved the imagery.

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Savita Tyagi 02 November 2014

Lovely poem. Truly Nature has give us liquid diamond in the form of water. Our life would be a stand still with out rain dance. Thanks for sharing, also many thanks for reading and commenting on my poem ' Yaden'.

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Walterrean Salley 03 November 2014

Water is a significant elment vital to mankind, and yet it is for amusement too. Enjoyed the stunning poem, excellently written. You are a very gifted poet. Thanks.

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Heather Wilkins 03 November 2014

water is so important for each living thing the rivers flow into the oceans great write

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 05 November 2014

So glad to see a really good poem which is painting the movement of waters. The lines and verses also dance. Great creative art, Bhargabi!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 April 2023

Fishes swim in lap of water with open wings, Conchs dance with shell forming shiny rings...true dear madam. A beautiful poem. Top score!

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Robert Murray Smith 07 June 2018

A poen that has the tranquility of water flowing.++10

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Galina Italyanskaya 04 December 2017

Thank you for sharing your lovely ode to water! Nice read!

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Melvina Germain 01 November 2015

Fabulous expression of an amazilessing to read.....

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Ramesh Rai 30 December 2014

Water is an important element of the creation without which creation is incomplete.Nicely penned well crafted.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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