In His Creation Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

In His Creation

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In his creation we are by his grace,
We move and live in this human race.
He has given everything here we need,
He is the true friend on time for indeed.

By his command nature does flow,
In streams and rivers sun shines glow.
Wind dances with thousands of legs,
By getting all fruits near who here begs?

All around of us resources he has kept,
We use these and rule, everything is left.
What is not that is not present in Earth?
Everything we have brought after birth.

Unseen fortune in birth has come with us,
As per our past actions we realize thus.
We have built the hopes as sky long temple,
We do hope high but we live in very simple.

In his creation we are super among guards,
We take care of them all animals or birds.
Sometimes we pollute environment is bad.
By mistake we forget father is matter of sad,

In his creation we are come on oh dear,
Join hands to live for long without any fear.
Let us sing his glory every day in pure mind
Beloved father he is truly very much kind.

Monday, September 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"In his creation we are present due to his grace. Due to his bless only we move and live in this civilized human race. Whatever we need here, he has given us everything. For indeed on time he is only our true friend. Due to his command only nature flows as stream and river. His command makes sun shines. Further sun-shines fall on streams and rivers and due to reflection in water they glow. Wind dances with thousands of legs due to his command. We get every fruit here near us. So there is no need to beg. He has kept many resources all around us. Everything is left for us and we use these and rule over. Actually there is no such thing that is not present in this Earth. Everything is present here. After birth everything we have brought too. In birth unseen fortune has come with us as per our past actions and we realize thus. As sky long like very long and high temple we have built made up of hopes only. Although we hope very high but we stay in very simple. We are super among guards in his creation. Animals or birds, all of them we take care. Sometimes we pollute environment is really a bad work. It is also the matter of sad that by mistake we forget our father, the creator of this creation. Oh dear, come on because we are in his creation. To live here without fear join hands of each other. Every day in pure mind let us sing his glory. He is our beloved father and truly he is very much kind." This poem is based on such theme and written in India on special occasion. This is dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 17 September 2014

What a beautiful poem, full of truth and finely written. I love and enjoyed it. You are an apt poet and an asset to the poetic society. May you continue to share. Thank you.

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 20 September 2014

Let us sing his glory everyday in pure mind.This is so sweet dear.keep it up.

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Chinedu Dike 29 September 2014

An adoration poem, written in praise of GOD THE CREATOR. A nice piece. Keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Chinedu Dike 29 September 2014

A confirmation of total submission to HIS WILL. A poem of adoration, a song of praise. Lovely. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ramesh Rai 29 September 2014

A beautiful excellent spiritual write. Invite you to read my series poem THE HYMN OF MERCY.

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Paul Sebastian 03 November 2014

A beautiful write! You are gifted by God. Thank you for the lovely poem. I enjoyed it. The God of creation is a God of love. We thank and praise God for this love given so freely. Often our offerings to God are imperfect, for we are mere mortals. God of love understands. Insightful!

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Ramesh Rai 09 October 2014

Outstanding, Marvelous. I love your footsteps. Regards.

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Mark Heathcote 03 October 2014

Lovely write enjoyed the read thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 September 2014

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Gideon Arthur 29 September 2014

Nice write. I loved the fifth stanza when dominion of man was stated and his carelessness emphasized. I enjoyed. Thanks

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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