Bewitchingly smooth
deer's eyes penetrating
fragrance unlimited
cheeks reflecting
soft caramel honey
lips full bloomed
youth in a platter
placing the attraction to conquerors
................................................cupids
................................................arrows
................................................pointers
vanity remains unperturbed to hold
..................................................purity
..................................................chastity
..................................................virginity
partial exchanges
unbreaking triangles
irresistible despairs
apathetic desires
selfless selves
pleasureless bodies
without organs
belittled to withdraw on common
.............................................chaos
.............................................commotion
..............................................turmoil
If you like this style, I have no reason to object it.
Duel meanings here twice read to ingest the full picture good style thankyou for the poem regards
Great poem contains great rhymes! ! ...10 I hope you take a look on my poems...Thanks for sharing. Merna
I agree with Les, beautiful rhythm. Lovely title. Daffodils are my favorite flower. I was nice to see the used so creatively.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a fantastic cogitation and written well....nice poem....