Crushed Cookies...... [humor; Short; Response To Brian Johnston's Poem 'For Me'] Poem by Bri Edwards

Crushed Cookies...... [humor; Short; Response To Brian Johnston's Poem 'For Me']

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IF i had soiled laundry...
of the marital kind,
someone other than you...
I WOULD surely find....
to ask for ADVICE (not
advise, you big dummy) .
And if you gave me advice,
I'm sure it'd be crummy.

That is crummy, meaning bad,
not crumby as you thought.
Crumby is what you got when...
crushed cookies you bought!


(November 28,2014)

Friday, November 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: humor
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston, PH 'friend'? , wrote and brought to my attention, his new poem 'PH: Love: Another Geometry Like Love'.

this was part of the comment i left for him at his poem today. when i sent it to him, the title was 'Dirty Laundry', but, since i like crushed cookies more than dirty laundry (and thought most of you would also) i changed the title! happy, everybody? ? bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 26 December 2014

Enjoyed your hilarious write. A good chuckle on the day after Christmas. Funny.

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Heather Wilkins 28 November 2014

a cute write cookies do get crumbly

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