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Poetheart (back)

Rookie - 273 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Crack of Doom!


so many words forgotten
and oh! the power

that causes sensations

if placed side by side

the crack and the doom
strong meaning
can be in the middle
can be inside
around and surrounding you

you could be swallowed
give you joyful endless
or drag you of darkness
to hell
indefinitely
But you! Oh baby
you are in every way in hell
And the Devil, laugh
he cracks to laugh

too, waiting

for your doom

Submitted: Wednesday, March 20, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, March 20, 2013

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This poem is about heart's of men. When he seeks and seeks affection of woman

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  • Rookie - 657 Points Unwritten Soul (3/29/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    I like this short one, its been a long time i am not here commenting your poem...yes i also had problem with PH before, thanks it just for temporary if not i will not exist here anymore _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Thomas A Robinson (3/27/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    The consumate man seeking love but unable to find it in any woman and goes through
    relationships after relationships and is never happy and does not know why. As a child
    probably was not love by his mother and now as an adult he is still searching for that mother's
    love but will never find it in any other woman. So he is doomed searching for something he will never
    find. Many call him a playboy, I call him pathetic. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poetheart (going) (3/24/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    To my friends poets!
    PH blocked me I do not receive or send any messages. Forgive me but the more I try I can not contact anyone. I have to wait! Love to all. Mirna (Report) Reply

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