Creator&Creature Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Creator&Creature

Rating: 4.9


Lower my head
entwine my hair
in my face of marble

As you did

undress all my silks
and some cotton
kiss my neck

as you like

Do not touch me I remain
look,
Lifeless there,

creator and creature

hopelessly

trace with your fingers
giving me life
the silhouette on my back
slowly and cautiously

Draw my form
with his hands and
take them to lips
Kiss

I'm your dream
or
your illusion
Created and now

Alive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 23 November 2013

You are one of the best creation of the great creator. i adore your emotion.

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Unwritten Soul 16 March 2013

I agree with all comments below, but then what i am going to comment? oh yes one thing..it has an original and very Mirna style! ..._Soul

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Nader Baheri 16 March 2013

so impressive and touching.the ending is really marvelous.the remained silhouette on the sand and kiss as the creator. love it 10++~nb

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Chandra Thiagarajan 13 March 2013

An admirable poem which touches the soul 1

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Robert Green 07 March 2013

Great to see you posting Mirna, and good write :)

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