Vijay Sai

Rookie - 307 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Cotton Candy - Poem by Vijay Sai

Pure pink
Fluffy and soft
So sweet and succulent
Sugar crystals all over
Weaving threads
So subtle and thin
Cotton candy
I had in a fair
So hard to forget
Its complexion and flavor
I look above
Sunlight into brilliant blue
Cotton candy clouds
Vivid white
Spreading all over
Sneaking here and there
So fluffy and soft
I wonder
So tempting
Can I have that too?

Comments about Cotton Candy by Vijay Sai

  • Gold Star - 12,359 Points Douglas Scotney (3/25/2014 8:02:00 PM)

    we call it fairy floss in Australia. Fairies swish it between their teeth. Well and good for them. As they don't eat they don't need their teeth. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,814 Points Mr. Agape (3/11/2014 10:16:00 PM)

    This is a great start on a poem that could be full of sexual innuendo! Take it further! ! !
    Make my heart beat (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Jonathan Karanja (2/8/2014 1:20:00 AM)

    Very well done my friend! Keep it up... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/27/2014 9:32:00 AM)

    Its really a tempting cotton candy. Really loved relishing it. I hope the candy is ready to be served to readers....Interesting poem. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (11/16/2013 11:27:00 AM)

    childhood memories, something that was forgotten
    but suddenly makes me miss the days that
    a simple idea but a broad influence on the reader
    beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/12/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    A nice reollection of childhood days, nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,798 Points Rohit Sapra (10/12/2013 7:09:00 AM)

    The flow of words is really nice and I liked reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 217 Points Wang Qian (10/12/2013 6:42:00 AM)

    very beautiful vision~!

    I want to have the cotton candy clouds too~ can I reach for them?
    Thanks for sharing, a sweet poem ^^ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Julius B (10/12/2013 6:41:00 AM)

    Nice. Glad to read it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,825 Points Amitava Sur (10/5/2013 2:59:00 AM)

    Nostalgic, once forgotten now I remember, ......... nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Ajay Verma (10/3/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    nice one..keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (9/25/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    Creative image kind of poem, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sankha Subhra Nayak (9/24/2013 3:26:00 PM)

    Really nice poem.. You are into brilliant poemhunter... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Shery Vincent (9/23/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    nice...just like went back to our childhood.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Craig Steiger (9/21/2013 11:09:00 PM)

    very nice! refreshing to come across a GOOD poem in here!
    brings back nice memories
    thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (9/21/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    Took me to that fair of yours. Could almost taste it. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie James Andrews (9/21/2013 1:24:00 PM)

    I like this a lot. Very evocative of time, place, and sensory sensation. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013

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