Comment Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

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Waiting for the kiss
You have promised me
When we met for the first time
Under the tree in
Your garden when birds
Were playing with sweet rhyme

Waiting for the hug
You have promised me
And it was always my ardent wish
Hand in hand to walk
Down the path to the beach
To sing song of love and peace

Waiting for the moment
When you will rush to me
And holding my hands you will say
Under the clear sky our
Bodies and souls will unite
That will be your most beautiful day

Monday, November 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 04 December 2016

Another lovely write..to look forward to the promise...of love....well done

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 December 2016

Yeah. Thanks a lot.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 04 December 2016

Love in a fine weather. Deep insight a lover's mind.Nice!

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 December 2016

Thanks very much for nice comment. Regards.

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Vevonulu Cho-o 29 November 2016

An excellent wishful love poem!

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 December 2016

Thanks very much for taking time to read my poem and giving nice comment. Much love.

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M Asim Nehal 28 November 2016

Wonderful poem........10

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 December 2016

I am glad you liked it. Regards.

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