Commencement Hour Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Commencement Hour

Rating: 5.0


Thirsty water
Twisting flower

Everywhere fire
Extinction inspire

Strange thunder
Love in wonder

Lord’s power
Commencement
Hour

(2008/4/14)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 14 April 2008

Great writing Persian, enjoyed it, so concise but full of words, Lynda xx

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 14 April 2008

Very, very beautifully captured picture of a great event that is 'in the air' and that is felt soon to take off...

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Rani Turton 18 April 2008

Very adroit and well-phrased. Thanks.

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Abha Sharma 17 April 2008

The epithets are very meaningful with perfect rhyming…loved reading it

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Patrice James 17 April 2008

what a wonderful msg. thanks........................

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Thad Wilk 14 April 2008

Lovely read indeed Shiraz, great share, well executed! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad

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... ... 14 April 2008

Very nice! I'm surprised by this limerick! Proud of you, my nightingale!

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