naida supnet

Freshman - 969 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

Clouds Amazing - Poem by naida supnet

The dripping ice cream from the ice cream man
The smiling clown jumping up and down
The funny snow man and Santa Claus
They all parade before my very eyes
Bunch of roses for a prettty lady
All becoming for a real beauty
The marching funny dwarfs and Snow white
All of them parade for my very delight
A ballet dancer poised in tiptoe
A little girl's cheeks rosy we know
Cotton candies colorful and sweet
These are the things that my eyes meet
Amazing clouds ever amazing
You create artworks, in the sky appearing
You amaze the audience with every parade
You make us smile in every charade
Amazing clouds you make my day
You inspire sad people in every way
The juggler juggling, little girls giggling
No wonder you bring a delightful feeling
Unending thanks for the One above
Even through clouds we see His love
A love that matters a love that counts
A love that stays in all our hearts.


Comments about Clouds Amazing by naida supnet

  • Rookie Vergielyn Cubol (10/8/2011 11:18:00 PM)

    lol..you know most people make wishes on stars..i made mine on clouds..love this..lovely (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Estrellita Dedel (9/16/2011 8:02:00 PM)

    this poem brings back that same old feeling i get when i look at the skies on a lazy afternoon and the warm gusts of wind were making the grasses sway. lol! 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Priyanka Agrawalla (7/12/2011 6:25:00 AM)

    Amazing! :)

    U made me to visualize too :) brought me childhood memories :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pink Butterfly ... (6/14/2011 11:16:00 PM)

    What a delight! ! ! This is simply amazing... The entire poem flowed wonderfully with it's calmness and beauty. A marvelous imagery was shown that made it just perfect. God bless you! ! !

    -Pink Butterfly- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (4/11/2011 6:14:00 AM)

    Hi Nadia, I really enjoy this poem I haven't come across many poems on clouds!
    But after reading this it makes me wonder why not? You obviously enjoy writing verse and this comes across so vividly in this excellent poem. I look forward to reading more of your stuff, keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie New Poet (3/7/2011 4:26:00 PM)

    I really like this one because it shows your ability with words and it doesn't seem like you try to rhyme but it comes more naturally to this poem and it's imagery and the way how the beggining seems to have a different situation then what is later revealed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Louis Cecile (3/7/2011 2:29:00 AM)

    Great use of metaphors for a rarely used theme. Words flow well and help with the imagery. Creates a need to re-read the piece. Excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Scarborough Gypsy (3/4/2011 6:38:00 PM)

    This was a nice contrast of man made beaty and the beauty of nature. Very enjoyable and some wonderful imagery.

    Smiles
    Gypsy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Santosh Sharma (3/2/2011 11:59:00 PM)

    Good imagination, nice flow and sequence of lovable moments. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aldo Kraas (2/24/2011 3:04:00 PM)

    I love the idea of the ice cream man.
    Youhave a good imagination (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alaude Solus (2/23/2011 7:19:00 AM)

    AWESOME!

    It gives that Christmas feeling.: D (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011


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