naida supnet

Rookie - 276 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

COFFEE CUP


I write my poems with my coffee cup
I smile as I write while the verses shape up
All the thoughts in my mind I write endlessly
For they flow nonstop as I sip my coffee

I watch the rain with my coffee cup
By the window I peep later i'm hooked-up
Every petal and leaf savor each drop
By the morning I will see a shiny dewdrop

With my coffee cup, I stare at the moon
I stare lovingly as my heart hums a tune
The love and the warmth I feel in my heart
The moonlight shower for me is an art

With my coffee cup, I watch my son plays
I will watch patiently until the coming days
When he laughs cheerfully I laugh all along
Music to my ears in my heart they belong

I wait for you with my coffee cup
I will wait until my waiting is up
When the day you get home what more can I say
'Kudos' coffee cup we made it...'hooray'

For I realize I won't make it this far
Without my coffee cup that stays near or far
It is a good friend that stands by my side
I can't thank it enough, this I cannot hide.

Submitted: Sunday, September 04, 2011

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  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/8/2012 12:52:00 PM)

    Coffee mug is caffinated and mixture of milk, water, brown unrefined sugar(Chinese i know like them) but in all it gave u the energy to write it.But this write will be a decaffinated one as it is going to live after your energy is conserved once you have finished up the last mark round of the coffee foments in life`s mug..Wonderful write.Coffee speeds up the heart.We all need our time to coffee.Inspiring flavour of poetry and i hope my puerile comment how this one add some cantuccini or cakes or biscuits to boost it up--i enjoyed Senhora..keep the good work up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Iwrite Iam (7/31/2012 6:06:00 AM)

    I wait for you with my coffee cup
    I will wait until my waiting is up
    When the day you get home what more can I say
    'Kudos' coffee cup we made it...'hooray'

    For I realize I won't make it this far
    Without my coffee cup that stays near or far

    These lines sum it up for me. Very Very well put... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Vijay Sai R (6/21/2012 12:27:00 PM)

    i feel i too have a coffee cup in my hand...nice food for thought (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (10/28/2011 4:45:00 PM)

    you have shared with us the aroma of coffee...
    very good description and rhymes in a smooth and lively flow..
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie William King (9/13/2011 10:47:00 PM)

    Its very descriptive. Your love for not only your coffee but your coffee cup is astounding. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,022 Points Unwritten Soul (9/13/2011 7:55:00 AM)

    Sipping 'coffee cup' that you made for us really taste like refreshing, and even i like but not big fan of coffee but this poem really has it aroma :) Nice poem_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 151 Points Wang Qian (9/12/2011 7:53:00 AM)

    very beautifully written...nice work! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (9/9/2011 7:49:00 PM)

    Your writing has a wonderful flow, something rare in poetry. Very beautiful, I hope you continue to write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 97 Points Michael Oliver (9/8/2011 6:05:00 AM)

    a serene self prortrait of the poet at work.The gentle idlings of the mind nurturing the idea into being.The importance of context all context not just the theme.Straight into 'my poems' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jo George (9/7/2011 8:31:00 AM)

    What a lovely poem. Most of us sip coffee everyday but seldom thinks about it as u thought. Great imagery and lines. loved reading your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,935 Points Ken E Hall (9/5/2011 7:07:00 AM)

    Delightful poem on the coffee cup a drink we all love to sip, and it seems to hold the poem as you write we can smell the coffee...great...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joseph Juarez (9/4/2011 5:32:00 PM)

    haha i love this poem great set up and detail... i love coffee to and its always with me at work i never thought about it as something as friend by myside til this because when i do forget my coffee all i think about is getting my cup i love this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jim Troy (9/4/2011 9:36:00 AM)

    I too salute that coffee cup for it has brought the world Naida, and the world needs
    this lady a lot. Such a wonderful picture you paint for us to enjoy, watching different beautiful events in a precious life with your friend the coffee cup. I love
    this poem.... you are up and running.... Jim Troy (Report) Reply

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