Camouflage Why Not Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Camouflage Why Not

Rating: 5.0


Stay where you are
Disappear if you must
Stay at the back
Or have yourself locked

You must never be seen
Never be in sight
You should know where you stand
You should know beforehand

If possible camouflage
Don't make any buzz
For if you're not in sight
Things will be alright

Fancied you are not
Keep quiet speak not
I know you are shy
But someday you'll get by.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 12 October 2011

The way around of encouraging verses. Nice logic of such intent.

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Jim Troy 13 October 2011

It is like a warm glowing friend helping a child to overcome fears and done in great feelings of affection and beauty. Good to see you writing again my friend Jim Troy

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Ken E Hall 15 October 2011

A great lesson for the quite ones the shy and young with suttle wisdom...regards

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Bella Hernandez 16 October 2011

interesting.... never quite read one such as this but very unique... i like it very much keep it up Naida ur Friend Bella

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Khairul Ahsan 10 August 2013

A wonderful poem. Many things are well said, unsaid. Yet..... A short note from the poem, perhaps?

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Serena Silenced 05 August 2013

There is a lot to be said for poets using their words to get their point across. You have done this very well. :)

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Kevin Patrick 26 October 2011

The title captivated me, and it did not disapoint, your direct with your observations, but that is something I enjoy is the clearity in language and the texture of your meaning. I get a feeling of frusteration being locked in a society that judges differences. Sad but wise

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Faith Bernardo 19 October 2011

Oooooh, I like this poem of yours!

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Unwritten Soul 17 October 2011

hahaha i remember how i was hoping having ability to camouflage when i was a child...And this kinda good teasing hahahahaha i like this poem and it made me smile..Now :) _Unwritten Soul

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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