naida supnet

Veteran Poet - 1,692 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

Camouflage Why Not - Poem by naida supnet

Stay where you are
Disappear if you must
Stay at the back
Or have yourself locked

You must never be seen
Never be in sight
You should know where you stand
You should know beforehand

If possible camouflage
Don't make any buzz
For if you're not in sight
Things will be alright

Fancied you are not
Keep quiet speak not
I know you are shy
But someday you'll get by.

Comments about Camouflage Why Not by naida supnet

  • Gold Star - 10,009 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/10/2013 8:32:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem. Many things are well said, unsaid. Yet.....
    A short note from the poem, perhaps? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Serena Silenced (8/5/2013 4:33:00 AM)

    There is a lot to be said for poets using their words to get their point across. You have done this very well. :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,666 Points Kevin Patrick (10/26/2011 12:40:00 PM)

    The title captivated me, and it did not disapoint, your direct with your observations, but that is something I enjoy is the clearity in language and the texture of your meaning. I get a feeling of frusteration being locked in a society that judges differences. Sad but wise (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Faith Bernardo (10/19/2011 6:27:00 AM)

    Oooooh, I like this poem of yours! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,673 Points Unwritten Soul (10/17/2011 5:25:00 AM)

    hahaha i remember how i was hoping having ability to camouflage when i was a child...And this kinda good teasing hahahahaha i like this poem and it made me smile..Now :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bella Hernandez (10/16/2011 1:34:00 AM)

    interesting.... never quite read one such as this
    but very unique... i like it very much keep it up Naida
    ur Friend Bella (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,848 Points Ken E Hall (10/15/2011 7:53:00 PM)

    A great lesson for the quite ones the shy and young with suttle wisdom...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jim Troy (10/13/2011 6:35:00 AM)

    It is like a warm glowing friend helping a child to overcome fears
    and done in great feelings of affection and beauty.
    Good to see you writing again my friend

    Jim Troy (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 826 Points Ency Bearis (10/12/2011 9:49:00 AM)

    The way around of encouraging verses. Nice logic of such intent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Maia Padua (10/12/2011 9:14:00 AM)

    very motivating...
    nice's like a reverse psychology for someone who is shy in expressing one self
    but you have a very positive ending....a push for her to go out from her shell...
    inspiring, challenging...your poem is worth a nice..nice smile....
    ganda...kakaaliw.....mapipilitan ang isang tao na maging strong and gutsy...
    haha (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 12, 2011

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