Bri's Fruit Picking..[a 'more-Mature' Poem Inspired By Valsa G's*] Poem by Bri Edwards
Bri's Fruit Picking..[a 'more-Mature' Poem Inspired By Valsa G's*]
To pick berry, Jane n' Joe went down the dale,
and for an hour, with berries, filled a big pail.
But Joe was soon h++ny, and Jane was so, ..so cute,
AND soon cute Jane was only in her.....birthday suit!
Now and then each would chew upon a red-ripe picked-berry,
but before long, Joe took his friend Jane's tender 'cherry'.
(May...28th....2018)
* Valsa George's poem: Limerick-74- Fruit Picking
Her poem, ...along with my "Dirty-Old-Manship" caused my poem to be written...[at first in a slightly-shorter form]...in my comment on Valsa's poem on PH.PH censored my earlier version. Thus my use of "+" for some missing letters: the letters "o" and "r", in that order.
hee-hee.
bri :)
interesting, ISN'T IT? all three commenters are 'guys' and their first names all begin with K. i kan thinc of a word which starts with a c (which sounds like a k) , and PH would probably censor me if i used it, Kostas' warning be damned! ! ! they [PH] might even cikc me off of PH! ! ! the word also would look like the American football word punt, IF only the c were changed to a p. :))))))))))))))))))))))))))) bri to MyPoemList, if i didn't already send it!
We all knew what the missing letters were, Bri. You didn't need to tell us. But now that you have, PH will probably censor you again.
Such is the way with most life forms. At least until they can't perform.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/28/2024 11:57:16 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Yikes......I am grieved to see my 'innocent' poem 'prostituted'! Let poem hunter penalize you once more!