Black Poem by live to die

Black

Rating: 5.0


Black as night
felling tense all of a sudden
like parilised cant move
I see blood coming out of my scars
whitch is everywhere on me
dark as if you were gone
no one there to comfort me
in my time of need
looking at a picture of you
remembering as you
were here
I am sorry but my sorrys
dont matter
if you were here
all my hate would be different
all you care about would
what I hate about you is
that you were never there
for me
Darkest I ever seen
Dark as Black

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

like a ballerina dressed in black forced to twirl for an eternity waiting for something to happen open your own door let your heart sing for me to hear

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Linda Brooks 16 June 2008

I want to help you through your depressed state but some times words can only make it worse.

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Serenity Prayer 04 June 2008

i feel that way bout someone too. you put your feelings into good detail and i can understand how you feel even of i didnt feel that way bout someone. very well written. keep up the good wotk.

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haha, told you i would comment, i like it, it does make semse. You tell how she wasn't there when you needed her the most and that you feel all sad dark and gloomy... am i right? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? kaila x

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