Bleed Poem by live to die

Bleed

Rating: 4.3


Bleed for what
Bleed to know your alive
Bleed to feel pain
Bleed so you don’t feel pain
from the others
Suffering, Crying
Knowing that your life
Is not worth living so
You cut hoping to bleed to die
Taking risks nothing you’d ever do
Just to bleed to get away from
The pain you felling inside
Changing yourself so no one
Will recognize you so they can’t
See your pain
Watching them pass
Like nothings wrong
So you bleed to know
The pain is fading away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

wow, that was really heartfelt... i likd it alot but i wish it wasn't how yu felt cos it is kinda sad... but i am glad yuhave it out on here so i can comment on it cos i loved it tons! ! ! ! ! ! ! Kaila x

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wow... im lost for words! i hope that you dont feel like this i know exactly how it is ive been here for 2 years now and well you said it all such talent

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William King 09 December 2008

This is one of the best poems I've ever read son...

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Bootiful Kid 04 August 2008

wow.... i love this poem so much.... well done....

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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

crimson red a color that shows well whenever pain is near please change that color so you don't feel anymore pain hear me out for i want to hear you out

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Tyease Collins 22 June 2008

Dude so deep. i felt like this sometimes. Like just to quit and just bleed...extraordinary poem **H3artBrok3n**

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Serenity Prayer 04 June 2008

its very sad but very well written. good job.

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