Bird's Song Poem by ramesh rai

Bird's Song

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Every morning i see
birds are chirping
sitting in a queue

The chirping of birds
breakes the silence of nature
makes me awaken
for being engaged in life

I try to understand
chirping of birds
which is beyond my reach

But melody of chirping birds
reaches my ear, as if
nectar of heaven
being pour down in my ears
erecting fidility of my life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 17 June 2013

so tender and beautiful poem thanks for sharing

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Farah Ilyas 18 June 2013

Beautiful display of birds chirping, well explanation of involvement of personal experience..

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Dinesan Madathil 18 June 2013

Ramesh Pai sir, It is a nice poem and it is your chirping for us who can reach out to you Happy to read your comment after a long time.

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Valerie Dohren 18 June 2013

I love birds, they are beautiful like your poem Ramesh.

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Shahzia Batool 20 June 2013

A feast for sight in the first stanza, and hearing in the rest of the poem...i recall wordsworth's The World, where he says the world is too much with us, late and soon, Getting and spending we lay waste our powers, a sordid boon...the reason of my recalling the lines from this sonnet is that we are so much into the problems that we miss the birds'chirping, the sun rising and setting, such scenes and melodies are really missed...it is a gentle poem!

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Patricia Grantham 08 March 2016

Beautifully stated. A nice poem about nature. Enjoyed.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2014

a nice and beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2014

a nice and beautiful poem.

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Amitava Sur 03 July 2014

Getting up in the morning hearing chirping of birds sounds very pleasing, but more I liked you expressed that thier melody energizes and adds fidility to life...... very nice

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Walterrean Salley 30 June 2013

Bird's song is sooo sweet. It adds to the beauty of life. We hear it everyday, and it inspires us in a great way, though we cannot understand it. A beautiful writing here. Thank you Ramesh.

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