Nur Meiyati


Between You and Me


I never become a man
You never become a woman
I never become you
You never become me
Although I try to stand on your shoes
I still cannot know exactly
What are in your mind and how you feel
Although maybe you try to read me
You still cannot know precisely
What I feel and what are in my mind
What is important for you
Maybe it is not important for me
What is important for me
Maybe it means nothing to you

I don't know you and you don't know me
But can't it be an amazing foundation
To understand each other
I will let you do whatever you want
As long as it does not harm you, me or anyone
Just as I want you
To let me do whatever I want
As long as it does not harm you, me or anyone
And it will be an additional value
If we support each other, help each other
Why not?

(Indonesia,6th October,2013)

Submitted: Sunday, October 06, 2013
Edited: Monday, October 07, 2013

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  • Rookie - 234 Points Lawerence Mize (12/11/2013 5:01:00 AM)

    Nice way to start a bond of trust. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nur Meiyati (10/16/2013 9:02:00 AM)

    Some of lovely comments from a Facebook group:

    Alicia C. Cooper Yes it can! ! I soo love your writing! ! So love it!
    56 minutes ago · Edited · Like

    Nur Meiyati @ Ms Alicia C. Cooper: thank you. You are always too nice, spending your time reading and telling me that you like my poetry.
    about an hour ago · Like

    Alicia C. Cooper You're welcome. I am a fan of yours. Your writing is consistently real and honest. If its not making me really think, it is teaching me and only the best writers are able to do that successfully! Please keep doing what you do!
    about an hour ago · Like · 1

    Nur Meiyati @ Ms Alicia C. Cooper: Thank you very much. I will save your compliment in my mind. Very much encouraging.
    58 minutes ago · Like · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nur Meiyati (10/16/2013 9:01:00 AM)

    Gajanan Mishra: Thank you for your nice comment. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,319 Points Gajanan Mishra (10/6/2013 11:35:00 AM)

    support each other, help each other, good write. (Report) Reply

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