Treasure Island

Hazel Connelly

(28th September 1949 / Lancashire)

Awakening


A slumberous sense of seclusion
As sleep is drifting from my eyes,
I look upon the translucent shade of the morning dew
While I, moving slowly do arise.

Watching the rain dripping from the eaves
Silhouetted in gold from the rising sun,
My mind gradually awakening
Now a new day has begun.

Through dimly, dancing dawns first light,
With sound of the rains chime,
The horizon still not clear
Just sweet thoughts of a shadowy time.

A light gust of wind gently lifts
The dead and dying leaves
Settling softly upon the ground
As light as the morning breeze.

The suns light a smile of gold
On the landscapes new days light,
Now stand and look at the rainbow
A gorgeous scene for mortal sight..

© 2012 Hazel

Submitted: Friday, April 13, 2012
Edited: Thursday, September 27, 2012

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  • Clarence Prince (5/30/2012 1:31:00 PM)

    Now stand and look at the rainbow
    A gorgeous scene for mortal sight. It's just wonderful, Hazel! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (4/17/2012 1:59:00 PM)

    Nice write! Wonderful nature poem.It sounds like a song.Awakening of the poet's soul and Nature as well. (Report) Reply

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