Aspect Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Aspect

Rating: 4.3


My dream floats in the wind
Beating your frosty lips as you
Go on doing the moon bath;
My breathe loves you to the
Core of your gene as silently
You recede to the gentle tide;
My wish plays with strands
Of your hair as you paint it
With the color of deep night;
I get lost in you as much as
Aroma of your song mingles
With the sanctity of a prayer
Dropping from the fresh buds.

Thursday, December 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Kanana 21 December 2016

This sounded very musical, the creativity in use of symbolism was rich-bringing out love and beauty together.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 December 2016

Honored...Thanks very much.

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Annette Aitken 08 December 2016

A lovely poem..but.. I have to ask...what does Go on doing the moon bath; ? ? mean. it sounds lovely I would just like to know its meaning :)

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Annette Aitken 18 December 2016

ah yes that makes sence now thank you for that.. :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 December 2016

She is getting washed by moon beam when she comes to stroll out side. And for reading and comment. Much love.

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