Neela Nath Das


Are You Taking.....? - Poem by Neela Nath Das

Are you taking patience's test?
Want to lick the life's best taste.

Love gave me terrible punch,
Enjoy on loss drinking Punch.

Vagabond red runs thru vein,
Your proud stamp is almost vain.

Free now from the firm shackle,
World calls don't try to shackle!
Nilakshi Das


Comments about Are You Taking.....? by Neela Nath Das

  • Gold Star - 22,834 Points * Sunprincess * (9/29/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    don't think anyone could shackle you..for you are a free spirit..love the poem.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 339 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/29/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    excellent rhyme words/beautiful poem! !
    top markss! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/28/2012 10:59:00 AM)

    Test of patience herewith.Tester versus tested and patience in tug-of-war. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 28, 2012



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