ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,601 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Apple


Sometime i think
if there was no apple
creation would not be completed

It is the apple
for laying foundation of human race, the begining of an era

Had Adam and Eve not ate the apple, was it possible to see
the existance of Human?

Falling of apple in Newton's garden lead him to the invention of gravitational law

It is the apple, became an unique language of computer

It is the apple
solves all disputes to initialise
as an apple of discord

Certainly, apple is a divine fruit
may give us much more in near future

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Submitted: Monday, July 15, 2013
Edited: Monday, March 24, 2014

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  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/23/2013 8:59:00 AM)

    Wonderful write....if there was no apple......Good poem...Thanks for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/22/2013 11:27:00 AM)

    It's a grand write to behold. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 363 Points Rekha Mandagere (7/21/2013 7:27:00 PM)

    You have much more than the nutrition value here hahaha. It is witty. I could dream about lovely apples of India by being in America. Thanks friend: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Sj Holland (7/20/2013 6:20:00 PM)

    I enjoyed your thoughts about the apple. Nicely written. Simple and easy to follow. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (7/19/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    yeah, i deal with it everyday
    a thought provoking poem
    rather a lovely truth (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (7/19/2013 12:31:00 AM)

    A nice analogy on apple. Creation of mankind has always been a subject of deep research. For me an apple a day keeps a doctor away. So far as poem is concerned, It is beautifully written in your own style. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,037 Points Valerie Dohren (7/16/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    If Eve had not eaten the apple, symbolically speaking, man would have remained in a state of ignorance and undeveloped consciousness - as you say, creation would not be completed. Good poem Ramesh. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,538 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/16/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    if there was no apple
    Hard to imagine the consequences. Thought provoking poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,313 Points Jesus James Llorico (7/16/2013 10:52:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem on apple, also referred as king of all fruits.
    so many histories are written and compared to this fruit.
    truly an excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (7/16/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    a good poem on this amazing fruit, Ramesh (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (7/16/2013 1:08:00 AM)

    wonderful poem, kindly visit my page for the sequel of this poem i wrote after reading your poem...thanks! ! ! (Report) Reply

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