Apple Poem by ramesh rai

Apple

Rating: 5.0


Sometime i think
if there was no apple
creation would not be completed

It is the apple
for laying foundation of human race, the begining of an era

Had Adam and Eve not ate the apple, was it possible to see
the existance of Human?

Falling of apple in Newton's garden lead him to the invention of gravitational law

It is the apple, became an unique language of computer

It is the apple
solves all disputes to initialise
as an apple of discord

Certainly, apple is a divine fruit
may give us much more in near future

l

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 16 July 2013

wonderful poem, kindly visit my page for the sequel of this poem i wrote after reading your poem...thanks! ! !

1 0 Reply
Tribhawan Kaul 19 July 2013

A nice analogy on apple. Creation of mankind has always been a subject of deep research. For me an apple a day keeps a doctor away. So far as poem is concerned, It is beautifully written in your own style.

1 0 Reply
Anamika Jalan 19 July 2013

yeah, i deal with it everyday a thought provoking poem rather a lovely truth

0 0 Reply
Raj Arumugam 16 July 2013

a good poem on this amazing fruit, Ramesh

0 0 Reply
Jesus Diaz Llorico 16 July 2013

A beautiful poem on apple, also referred as king of all fruits. so many histories are written and compared to this fruit. truly an excellent write.

0 0 Reply
Unwritten Soul 27 July 2017

I m not sure the apple that Adam and Eve ate is the same one we have nowadays...i think its different, but as i take nothing serious to not understand the beauty of your thoughts, i mean your idea is brillant voyaging time to time from past to future, and how apple subject keep making history maybe you can add, an apple a day keep doctor away (we used to hear this) .... and Apple is influential technology company now, what will be in the future...so i think you are clever by picking this thought to be served on this table...of observation and poetry...i just yum yum!

0 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 23 July 2013

Wonderful write....if there was no apple......Good poem...Thanks for sharing...

0 0 Reply
R.j. Wynn 22 July 2013

It's a grand write to behold.

0 0 Reply
Rekha Mandagere 21 July 2013

You have much more than the nutrition value here hahaha. It is witty. I could dream about lovely apples of India by being in America. Thanks friend: -)

0 0 Reply
Sj Holland 20 July 2013

I enjoyed your thoughts about the apple. Nicely written. Simple and easy to follow.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success