Apologetic gesture and earnest attempts to woo
Do or die approach with resolve to do
I find it very hard and out of it nothing to gain
It adds to tension and worries still remain
It is not fact that I want to be aloof
But I expect the result to be full proof
Can’t afford to be even slight careless
All my efforts are dedicated and in fairness
You may comment and pass casual remark
I still go ahead and ventures embark
Whatever may be result or outcome?
I shall steadfast and offer the welcome
what do we need in our general dealing?
Gentle and mild touch with smooth healing
Book pages always open and nothing to conceal
Highest regards even when secrets to reveal
Why are we disliked in general?
Is it our approach or bad moral?
Even water tests sweet if it is fresh mineral
Sweet words only please others and do the miracle
We offer floral tribute on somebody’s death
Shed the teats with feelings and lay the wreath
Is it not senseless to utter bitter words and damage?
We pay respect by paying good homage
These are not mere book words or advice
Neither they are mechanical nor any device
It is practiced in good faith and in general pattern
Finding correct path even with the dim light of lantern
No one may like the way as suggested
Minds are bogged down with traffic congested
Nothing goes normal as ground not tested
Bad ideas gain momentum and good ideas arrested
We can avoid so many things in public
We can not sight any reason specific
It has to be in keeping with tradition
It can’t be spelled out with any condition
I may have solid reasons to go for it
I may apologize and humbly submit
I can’t do or remedy the thing undone
Only way open for us is to forget and pardon
To pardon with grace is considered a big gesture
Relation is built by keeping in view bright future
It may add to existing relation with sweetness
Strong bond of friendship with complete openness
It is necessary to plant the seeds in advance
Future may speak of it when you just glance
Tree may not come up in one day or grow
Its process will be gradual and seemingly slow
We will witness the miracle of apologetic gesture
Person may be induced to have good ideas or nurture
It has got direct bearing on our behavior and relation
Its outcome may be sign of good indication
i like it great topic... :) Poem Writer, Jackie Thielman
A wonderful mix of words, and what you made is a wonderful poem, , , , a wonderful apologetic gesture.
yes...when we apologise...we are not becoming small...we only necome more magnamous....wonderful write.....thanks for sharing.
Apologetic gesture and attempts to woo Do or die approach with resolve to do I find it very hard and nothing to gain Adds to tension and worries still remain well put!
What do we need in our general dealing? Gentle and mild touch with smooth healing Pages always open and no more concealing Highest regards even when secrets revealing it is very positive behavior towards social life, to remain steady and tolerant and keeping on doing good refuses evils
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A NICE AND RHYTHMIC POEM GOOD TO READ! 10! -RAJ