Owain Glyn


Alone? - Poem by Owain Glyn

I am sat on a bench, on the seafront, alone,
Just me, and the sea, and the old weathered stone.
Of course, there are tourists, who wander on by,
And silver winged gulls, as they dissect the sky.

There are fishing boats, plying their trade in the bay,
Whilst pleasure craft hoist up their sails for the day.
I can see the face painters and bead makers too,
As I watch pale-faced addicts who head for the loo.

A solitary policeman, whose aspect is stern,
As he dreams of promotion and what he might earn.
A parking attendant comes slithering by,
Making sure nothing misses his keen gimlet eye.

Young men on their skateboards come thundering past,
Looking sideways at anglers whose lines have been cast.
I am sat on a bench, on the seafront, alone,
It's a solitary life, but I don't think I'll moan! !
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

An old guy sitting on the seafront feeling quite lonely suddenly realizes how much is going on around him.

Comments about Alone? by Owain Glyn

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (4/10/2013 6:53:00 AM)

    This honestly had me in tears within the first two stanzas. Your descriptive skills are impeccable and then I burst out laughing as the traffic warden slithered by lol hahaha! Perfect
    Then you tinker on the lost (addicts) and nearly lost (policeman) . This made me picture Padstow my heaven.
    And finally you settled neatly back on you which became us the observer in silent reverence. I rarely and I mean rarely ask but plz consider reading beach life as to me it is my moment such as yours in a far less picturesque area. This is far better than mine but just feel you might enjoy it a bit. Ty (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 38 Points Ruby Honeytip (12/25/2012 5:56:00 PM)

    You are a lovely storyteller: ^) This poem has a lilting rhythm...very cool and illustrative: ^) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,060 Points Clarence Prince (12/17/2012 2:33:00 PM)

    A good poem, with fun in it too! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,964 Points Lyn Paul (12/17/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    Love the rhyming, the beach and love being alone, Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tiffany Baldwin (12/17/2012 4:12:00 AM)

    I was sitting right next to him while reading your poem. Great job. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (12/17/2012 2:26:00 AM)

    A very positive ending.. liked it so much... we all sometimes need some time alone... its also a part of life... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (12/16/2012 5:01:00 AM)

    a nice calm good write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,902 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (12/15/2012 8:03:00 PM)

    quite interesting poem! nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Terry O'leary (12/15/2012 11:50:00 AM)

    Very good pom... nice rhyming and flow... Terry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maggie Munro (12/14/2012 7:07:00 AM)

    The critical difference between being alone and being lonely, well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (12/13/2012 6:45:00 PM)

    Great poem Owain, I enjoyed this unique view of loneliness. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 13, 2012



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