All Alone! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

nice poem that ends in a positive note.very nice.

The poem is the outcome of one of your bitter moods, I suppose...! Come out of it first.... Show your resilience as before, Geetha! A very touching write and the tone is depressing!

Strong with fine rendering and much alive facts Geetha. The poem ponders over the life of all here and there, now or then and what for and what for not... The saga goes on despite the ordeals and reverses... Here is a 10 for you.

Yes alone and alone you have to walk the path of truth.........Geetha..........it stings.....It teases....even it brings you to the verge of breakdown of nerves.......tastes your patience and you lose if you submit and you win if you fight though you have to have faith keeping it alive till the last minute........feelings well expressed.......

On the path of truth you find all alone. All alone one has to swim across the river of hurdles! very true but it echoes some pain............ like it

It gives a deep pain Especially when one swallows injustice. It is rightly said On the path of truth you find all alone. All alone one has to swim across the river of hurdl Go on marching on the path of truth, soon you will listen to many footsteps behind you.

A poem in a difference and the loneliness and related sadness is understandable and the pain effected is also a case of pessimism which is beautifully told by the poet in her poem and liked it.

Great poem on the dreaded loneliness and the cells of the body affected, funny last night I was reading Deepak Chopra's Quantum Healing which has all the answers for the poem...regards

Great poem on the dreaded loneliness and the cells of the body affected, funny last night I was reading Deepak Chopra's Quantum Healing which has all the answers for the poem...regards

Well, dear poet, your words and expressions rightly bear the inevitable despondency and invariable pain of all the living mortals on this beautiful planet. Problems must duly be revered with solutions that bear an apt benefit too. when you say, Neither I can cut it nor I can treat it As it already infected my blood and cells all over... i must remind you that the telomere is something predesigned by nature to destine every cell life; longevity is determined on that factor in physical life, whereas fate is a kind of a shadow which follows us all till we eliminate it with the absolute stretch. As matters are this much obvious why should one keep brooding over the fleeting misgivings of daily life! ? .. Na. Cheers. God Bless.