Adventures Of Two Captains To The Heart Of Galaxy, Part 3 Poem by Captain Cur

Adventures Of Two Captains To The Heart Of Galaxy, Part 3

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Near the gates of an unknown place we stopped
The smell of darkness was everywhere like a satanic smoke.

Captain Cur pointed to the gates as the doors of Ashland,
He said: 'We must destroy the darkness here and its land.'

The gates opened, as a wind that spirits in the galaxy
And then a great, barren land appeared in front of our ship,

Lands full of Ashes and death
Its sky was full of the people who chase the bless.

I asked Captain: 'Why do we come here? '
That hero replied: 'Don't worry and don't fear

A friend of ours needs help in this place
And he can show us the true way in this case.'

The silence of that land was like a wavy sea
And the ashes were dancing with the wind.

We entered that place, I held my breath,
I looked at Captain, he was looking toward the way,

Then, all of a sudden, a scream rose up
And the ship start to move like a leaf in the wind…

TO BE CONTINUED

Ellias Anderson, Captain A
in corroboration with Captain Cur

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These stories are being written by myself and my good friend
Ellias Anderson. Please visit his page for the continuation
of our adventures.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 13 April 2013

the narration in poetical way absorbed me. what then? ~nb

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Unwritten Soul 07 April 2013

Hahahaha i laughed when two captains each other calling themselves as captain..i enjoyed this adventure, i need a shine from a start to heal my stye on my blunt left eyes to see...it seems captain has show me some a way by a precious constellation that he seen through years of this journey in milkaway seas_Soul

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