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Adventures of Two Captains to the Heart of Galaxy, Part 3


Near the gates of an unknown place we stopped
The smell of darkness was everywhere like a satanic smoke.

Captain Cur pointed to the gates as the doors of Ashland,
He said: 'We must destroy the darkness here and its land.'

The gates opened, as a wind that spirits in the galaxy
And then a great, barren land appeared in front of our ship,

Lands full of Ashes and death
Its sky was full of the people who chase the bless.

I asked Captain: 'Why do we come here? '
That hero replied: 'Don't worry and don't fear

A friend of ours needs help in this place
And he can show us the true way in this case.'

The silence of that land was like a wavy sea
And the ashes were dancing with the wind.

We entered that place, I held my breath,
I looked at Captain, he was looking toward the way,

Then, all of a sudden, a scream rose up
And the ship start to move like a leaf in the wind…

TO BE CONTINUED

Ellias Anderson, Captain A
in corroboration with Captain Cur

Submitted: Sunday, April 07, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

These stories are being written by myself and my good friend
Ellias Anderson. Please visit his page for the continuation
of our adventures.

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  • Freshman - 2,381 Points Diane Hine (4/9/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    A fast-paced cliff-hanger, but don't call him a hero, it'll go to his head. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (4/7/2013 11:04:00 AM)

    Hahahaha i laughed when two captains each other calling themselves as captain..i enjoyed this adventure, i need a shine from a start to heal my stye on my blunt left eyes to see...it seems captain has show me some a way by a precious constellation that he seen through years of this journey in milkaway seas_Soul (Report) Reply

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