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Captain Cur

Rookie - 321 Points (England)

Adventures of Two Captains

Our story began thousands of years ago
When people lived with love and no ego

The time that their hearts beat for each other,
The time that the darkness was the only thing that bother

I was passing my way through the Milky Way with my space ship
I was looking for the light in the deep

The darkness came to my ship, the darkness and its forces
They entered the space ship with their horses

In the blink of an eye
Most of my men die

A tragedy of blood and death
All the ship sinks in corruption and mess

Death made his gallows for us, he made a rope
But put it in your minds, in every disgraced condition there is hope

A glorious light attacked the darkness
It was the time that we saw the bless

It was the time that I met that hero
And I believed in hope, even as small as a biro

A noble captain and a brave sir
The captain of the galaxy, YES! ! Captain Cur

He and his men fought with faith
'They are unique' the light saith

The darkness ran away, but for now
We were sure that it will come back, but didn't know how! ?

My last crew and I
Were saved from the die

Our savior was Captain Cur
When the darkness hears his name, it will purr

So we joined him, we made a unique group
And our actions made the darkness droop

We sail our way to the heart of the Milky Way
To kill the darkness there, to send it for an eternal lay

To be continued…..

Ellias Anderson
in collaboration with:

Submitted: Tuesday, March 19, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, March 19, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This series of poems are a collaboration between myself
and my good friend Ellias Anderson, also known as Captain A.
I particularly enjoyed the lines:
Our savior was Captain Cur
When the darkness hears his name, it will purr.
Thank you Ellias for inviting me to join you on
your adventures through the Milky Way.

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  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (3/30/2013 3:15:00 AM)

    Oh my adorable captain did a write with my lil quack quack... i really love this, and because of both have great hearts i think even with two captains for a journey, as long it can be in one mind it never mind though...a lil captain must learn from Captain cur...have a great adventure to discover new mystery in our Milky Way! ! _Soul (Report) Reply

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