John Hazon Palen

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Achiever - Poem by John Hazon Palen

God permits His men to win,
Just let courage reign.
Let's hold on to prayers, friend,
Quit not believing…

I'm so happy now, I say.
‘Tis success we've gained.
All our hardwork's worth the pay;
The end of fears came.

We did make it thru the maze,
When our hands embraced.
Finally, we solved the case,
Together thru rains.

Actions can do change our fate,
‘Tis just if we'll take.
Once again, I see sunrays;
Ends link with the means.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

(This poem encapsulates what happened these last days of March regarding my studies. Thank God!)

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  • Freshman - 634 Points marvin brato (9/29/2013 11:52:00 PM)

    Well-penned, very enlightening write! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 9, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 3, 2012

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