ONElia AVElar

Rookie - 12 Points (Bulgaria)

Above The Love Poem by ONElia AVElar


above
the croissant of new moon
dipped in the milky foam of clouds
below
the hungry fishes of my thoughts
jump out of the imaginarium
to catch
the falling lunar crumbs
to feed the newborn
love


Special thanks to R.V.©, who translated the poem in French (quite well!)

Au dessus,
le croissant de la nouvelle lune
se mélange à la mousse laiteuse des nuages.
Au dessous,
les poissons affamés de mes pensées
sautent hors de l imaginarium
afin d attraper les miettes de lune tombantes,
pour nourrir le nouveau-né...
AMOUR.

ONElia AVElar ©

Submitted: Tuesday, October 25, 2011
Edited: Friday, October 28, 2011

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  • Rookie - 5 Points Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (1/26/2013 4:02:00 PM)

    Nourishment is from the Sky or, better, directly from Heaven. One should listen to 'Panis Angelicum' (Angelic Bread) by Frank. Angelic milk: Onelia's joing blessin' poets. Hi to Onelia and everybody (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ruby Honeytip (1/3/2013 2:47:00 PM)

    Beautifully inspiring work: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Indira Babbellapati (10/10/2012 5:44:00 AM)

    visiting ur pages after long, i'm charged with this powerful imagery... 'hungry fishes of thoughts...' ah! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Subrat Pradhan Love-immortal (7/21/2012 5:30:00 AM)

    well written. good imagery. try reading my love poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Liz Thaugally (11/3/2011 5:14:00 AM)

    This is absolutely gorgeous- the mark of a great poem is one that can be translated and yet still hold its melodious meaning. Love this Onelia.x (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,344 Points Hans Vr (11/1/2011 9:38:00 AM)

    ONElia,
    Long time I had not come ot your page.
    Very interesting poem, superb images for a very sensual topic.
    The position of the words make the interpretation at second reading very interesting :)
    I think you master metaphors so well. Fantastic. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (10/31/2011 11:58:00 AM)

    Onelia, j'adore cette poeme! ! ! Tres magnifique! ! ! HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Onelia Avelar (10/31/2011 5:08:00 AM)

    Wow, what of an interesting comment thank you! ! A poem like a scorpioo :)) its true! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R.k Das (10/31/2011 3:26:00 AM)

    this poem also stings
    like a scorpian
    the last line of the poem,
    as usual is the icing on cake

    looks a very symbolical with powerful imagery.... (Report) Reply

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